Cold touch
His hand slowly wiped her face. Drenched in sweat, she was gasping for air. He slowly moved the hair from her face. She could see him clearly. He had a smile on his face. Mischievous, victorious. It reminded her of the first time they met. The same grin, now, looks so different. Slowly, she sank to ground clutching her stomach shaking, sobbing. The last thing she saw was the melting knife.
Disclaimer: This is just a story
Disclaimer: This is just a story
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I was reading through a blog. The author had some nice short stories. For a long time, i wanted to write some short things and also some dark things. Tell me if i overdit it. I shall get rid off it! i don't want it to imply any violent nature on my side, given, the prejudice attached to me!
Short stories can't be that short....My eyes fell on the last line, even b4 I could read the first....atleast ppl should scroll down to the last...
I have lotsa ideas for a short story..but no time to write ...I wanted to write a long story for "most handsome guy in the world"....but had to write a really brief one as it was a blog
The Affair
"Oh, I want you so much".
They kissed passionately in his swanky office.
"What if your wife finds out?"
"Dont worry. Its been taken care of...and how many times have told you not to wear that horrid blue dress."
"Won't happen again Mr. President"
Yo! what the hell!! looks like you have been reading the wrong books dude!
These things are actually classified as shorts in most literrary domains. I have dabbled at them too but I have structured them as poems. Nice post Totti.
U just killed Kkkkkkkkkkkkkkiran and picked up the best villan award in one single post.
I did find it funny though that even after putting a diclaimer u had to post comments abt the same too as if u were kinda ashamed of the post.
Hee hee. i don't know what kind of content is considered f*ing offensive man. it always gets me.which images to put.which not to put
totti u f***in maniac !! i knew that world would find out about the hidden face behind that innocent mask, but not like that, not in ur own words :)) and oh, a disclaimer wont count if u kill someone and say 'sorry, i was just trying, if u think its not that good, well then , ummm i am sorry !'
Totti: Its you who has been reading the wrong books. You wont find that in Harry Potter.
Rohan: Would like to see some of your shorts. No pun intended. Honest!
I agree with Chillar. I read somewhere that 'Normal is being a psycho inside'. Guess that applies to totti. Looks like there is a ruthless beast hiding inside the seemingly "normal" totti.
It is pretty graphic for short tale.
really? i wanted it to be graphic..was'nt sure at all...glad you felt it was!!
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