October rain
I sat alone on the window of my apartment. Looking out, i see the city of New York doused in rain. I have mixed feelings about the rain in october. It is just when the warmth of the summer is receding, the cold wet slap of rain comes down.I spot a pigeon flying slowly, heavy with the weight of rain in its feathers.It looks doleful and lands infront of my window. Poor chap. And, then from nowhere slams a hawk onto it.For some, it does'nt matter if the world is turning upside down. They always deem it a good opportunity to plunder. It is just their nature.
6 Comments:
....looking thru window in NY...wishful thinking....pls edit the post to say SC instead of NY...
...the hawk on pigeon, is analogous to someone thulping u for 4 sixes....its in their nature too...
Nice post thought from the way the entry of hawk is worded it looks as if it kinda accidentally splats on ur window.
Beautifully written. Loved reading it!
Good imagery!
@pointy - :P have some imagination once in a while da!in your dreams you will whack me for four sixes.it would be the other way around.junta (me incl.) whacking you around
@rohan - you should have seen it. i should have said swooped onto it
@casablanca - always a pleasure to hear that
@janani - glad i could potray a good image instead of a fuzzy,hazy black and white mass of lines :P
Maan.. jus when we were talking/planning about writing alike about something.. it happened by sheer coincidence that we both wrote about rain... I just read your blog once I saw your comment on mine:)
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